My fifty-five word poem
English August attempted a fifty-five word poem and I wanted to have a go at it. This is my first attempt.
my love
she looks at me
does not make a move
I return her stare
she stretches
her languid body
sinuous and graceful
I smile at her
will her to come to me
she does not move
I give in
pick her up
rub my cheek
against her
she curls up
like ermine
around my neck –
amour
55 word poem
my love
she looks at me
does not make a move
I return her stare
she stretches
her languid body
sinuous and graceful
I smile at her
will her to come to me
she does not move
I give in
pick her up
rub my cheek
against her
she curls up
like ermine
around my neck –
amour
55 word poem
posted by Mrudula at 4:45 PM
13 Comments:
Hi Mrudula, this is a really good fifty fiver you have created! Can we look forward to more?
Simple and beautiful! Look forward to more.
WOW!! That was goooood :D
Thanks fame junkie, aquamarine and rita. I'll write more.
Beautifully written, i wonder how u all come up with such beautifull stuffs...:)It was really pleasure reading this and ur previous posts and i liked the one on Gandhiji.
Chwweeeet!(i guess babytalk is inevitable when u read stuff about them)
I admire the poet in you.
good one !
This is a really good one. And here I am at your blog!
:-)
Have linked it to my post.
Hi there..Im glad you took up the 55 words...Love the way you wrote it...Keep up the writing
Another beautiful 55 :)
Look forward to more...
A nice try for the 55 worder. Enjoyable!
NANYAAR?
beutifully written! :-)
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